为什么很多学生明明词汇量还可以，做阅读听力基本不成问题，但UKiset作文依然没法提高原因除了观点逻辑方面欠缺以外，如何做到地道的英语表达也是亟待解决的一个问题。
我们来看一个例子：
If schoolsadministeredwith anyteachers,disorderandlawlessnesswould arise.
这句话中看起来似乎用了“高端词”，但实则只是让整个表达变得非常别扭不自然。我们修正一下，变为If schools were run without teachers, the behaviorof pupils would be much worse.可以看到用词难度下降了很多，但是整个句子变得清新自然从而更加准确有效。
因此，若想在真正意义上用好自己已知的词汇来提高表达，我们就应该在平时写作说话中不断积累英语词汇的搭配。
1.经常锻炼能改善人们的身体健康
Often exercise can improve people’s bodyhealth.
Taking exercise regularly can improvepeople’s physical health.
2.家长和老师应该减少孩子看电视的时间
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's time of watching TV
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's screen time
3.处理生活垃圾是当地政府的一项重要任务
误：Dealing with living rubbishis an important task for local governments
正：Disposal of household wasteis an important task for local governments
4.政府应该给出处理环境问题的解决方法
误：Governmentsshould give a solution to deal with the environmentalproblem.
正：Governments shouldfind a solution to the environmentalproblem.
Find a solution to sth是固定搭配，而且没有solution to do这种表达
5.艺术不是学校的主科
误：Arts is not thecore curriculumat school
正：The arts is not amongthe core subject areasat school
6.不明朗的经济前景导致了失业率的提高
误：Ambiguouseconomicfutureleads to the riseon unemployment
正：Uncertaineconomicoutlookleads to the riseon unemployment
Ambiguous指含义意思的不明确模糊
7.高昂的费用是人们质疑奥运会承办的一个原因
误：Lavish spendingis one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
正：High spendingis one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
Lavish指慷慨或奢侈，不和spending或cost搭配
8.空运会产生很多温室气体
误：Air transportationwill create many greenhouse gases.
正：Air freightwill create many greenhouse gases.
9.有很大朋友圈的人通常会更快乐
误：People witha large community of friendsare morelikely to be happy.
正：People witha large circle of friendsare more likelyto be happy.
10.只犯小罪就受到严厉的惩罚是不公平的
误：It is unfair to bepunished strictlyformakinglittle crimes.
正：It is unfair to bepunished stifflyforcommittingminor offences.
11.如今人们越来越善于使用高科技
误：People have increasingly been good atusing hightechnology.
正：People have increasingly been skilled atharnessing hightechnology.
12.最新的设计正在改变我们的日常生活。
误：The latest designis changing our daily lives.
正：New cutting-edge designis transforming our daily lives.
13.拆除那些废弃的大楼能改善城市外观
误：Destroying those abandoned buildingscan improve the appearance of the city.
正：Demolishing those derelict buildingscan improve city’s image.
14.发展交通网络能改善道路拥挤问题
误：Developingtransport webscanimprove the problemof traffic jam.
正：Developingtransport networkscanease the problemof congested roads.
15.很多问题影响着贫困家庭
误：There are many issues affectingpoor families.
正：There are many issues affectinglow-income/less well-offfamilies
16.政府应该给贫困家庭提供便宜的住房。
误：The government should providepoor familieswithcheaperhouses.
正：The government should providelow-income/less well-offfamilies withaffordable housing.
17.政府应该改善贫困落后地区的生活水平。
误：Government should improve the living standard inpoorregions
正：Government should improve the living standard inrun-downareas
Run-down意为“条件非常差，非常落后”
18.采取严厉的措施来打击犯罪
误：To takestrict measures to strike crime
正：To takedraconian measures to crack down crime
19. Give some suggestions
Make some suggestions
Give a contribution to
Make a contribution to
20.用正确的搭配来表示“停止或结束”
停止军事行动put a halt to military action
停止结束会议bring the meeting to a close
制止坏行为put a stop to bad behavior
终止合同terminate the contract
停止政策abandon the policy
21. very的替换词及固定搭配
highly educated; highly recommend
strongly influence
greatly appreciate; greatly influence
completely different; completely dependent
deeply offensive
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